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Ifa Inziati
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"Beneath the colorful mess of silk, he found a wrinkled, yellowed page of paper. He quickly reburied it. Then, stirred by thoughts of immortal flight and golden sunrises, [he] pulled it back out."
It's missing a word... I hope it gets better because I really want to like this 😫
— May 29, 2026 06:58AM
It's missing a word... I hope it gets better because I really want to like this 😫
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Ifa Inziati
is on page 36 of 336
Just realized the author might prefer use commas rather than em dash—why? I hope it's just artistic choice/poetic license.
— May 30, 2026 06:22AM
Ifa Inziati
is on page 18 of 336
Sy let his curiosity get the better of him. “Where is Hugo? [Is he] Promoted, finally?”
“Dead, [Sir.]” said the new footman. “Sir. Of pneumonia.”
I promise I'll be not nitpicky this is the last time (but IMHO the first chapters are in need of serious copy editing).
— May 29, 2026 09:34PM
“Dead, [Sir.]” said the new footman. “
I promise I'll be not nitpicky this is the last time (but IMHO the first chapters are in need of serious copy editing).
Ifa Inziati
is on page 15 of 336
"Beneath the colorful mess of silk, he found a wrinkled, yellowed page of paper. He quickly reburied it. Then, stirred by thoughts of immortal flight and golden sunrises, [he] pulled it back out."
It's missing a word... I hope it gets better because I really want to like this 😫 (reposted bc I accidentally marked it as read, I'm still on page 15 LMAO)
— May 29, 2026 07:04AM
It's missing a word... I hope it gets better because I really want to like this 😫 (reposted bc I accidentally marked it as read, I'm still on page 15 LMAO)
Ifa Inziati
is on page 3 of 336
The sentences feel choppy—like English isn't the author's native language? (but then English is not my native language too so yeah)
— May 29, 2026 05:02AM