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The lack of a good proofreader continues, she notices that her phone is missing on page 134. and never finds it and then notices again that her phone is gone on page 167, but says that she had it earlier, she’s never seen it in the past 30 pages. What are we talking about?

‘It was as if a Teletubby had spat in my face.’ Best line of the whole book so far.

On page 10 Florence starts the email, dear Lee, but then on page 14. Nora ends her reply with ‘Claire will know me as Lee’ but we’ve already been told that a couple of pages ago without any warning which led to me blinking like (why is Nora known as Lee?)

Those little things that should have been caught just annoy me so much