Onika’s Reviews > Shield of Sparrows > Status Update

Chapter, 45

70%

Ransom 🙂🙂

I really want to love this, but so far it’s just okay. There is a lot of narration, and I almost wish it was in 3rd person. I’m over 60% and im still waiting for the plot to pick up

It doesn’t feel like I’m almost halfway 🙂