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is 5% done
DNF at 6%
Ok I am going to be as kind as possible given I believe this is the first book written by the Author. However while concept of the book showed promise it lacked so much. Those reviews that say it’s like it was written by a teenager are pretty accurate because the FMC lacks any depth, the dialogue is repetitive and the character is frustratingly contradictory.
— Jun 02, 2026 01:19PM
Ok I am going to be as kind as possible given I believe this is the first book written by the Author. However while concept of the book showed promise it lacked so much. Those reviews that say it’s like it was written by a teenager are pretty accurate because the FMC lacks any depth, the dialogue is repetitive and the character is frustratingly contradictory.
