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Mark Palmer Reaching the interesting point?


Roger Alix-Gaudreau Brin just saw the Forsaken in the ruins…


Mark Palmer Interesting concept. A little similar to Restarting the Apocalypse, but much better.


Roger Alix-Gaudreau I haven’t read that one yet, but it looks interesting. Aspects of this one are quite good, but I could do with fewer adolescent asides.


Mark Palmer It takes a bit to really get going. Around the 50% mark I didn't want to put it down.


Roger Alix-Gaudreau Yeah, the early parts are the “introduce the character and the reader to the world and the system” that seems pretty common of LitRPG, in general. Frankly, if I write a LitRPG, I’m going to work hard to cut that way down or eliminate it. Just throw the reader in and let them figure it out. :-)

I agree that things really ramped up with they got to the ruins. That’s where the action ramped up and the action got real.


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