Ashley Gates’s Reviews > Nothing But Blackened Teeth > Status Update

This writing style is confusing, weak, & immature. The characters aren’t believable. why is Phillip a billionaire, a quarterback, a chess pro, a priest, and so on? I thought we started with the narrator and Phillip married? As it turns out, the honeymoon mentions etc were not relevant. The metaphors and similes aren’t sticking. Was it said everyone grew up in Malaysia? Disoriented. It’s short; I’ll persist.