Starlight’s Reviews > The Forbidden Dragon King > Status Update
Starlight
is 5% done
so this will be a dnf.
🖕🏻
go fuck your self and your shit story.
i’d rather take a dump than force myself or anyone else to read this shit writing.
immediate spot on the ban and blacklist.
— Jun 04, 2026 06:26AM
🖕🏻
go fuck your self and your shit story.
i’d rather take a dump than force myself or anyone else to read this shit writing.
immediate spot on the ban and blacklist.
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Starlight
is 5% done
yeah
no
i’m not going to force myself to read more
you have a prologue?
fine
but it better be fucking interesting
this wasn’t even memorable except that i know it was shit
chapter one
the very first line needs to at least catch my eye
nothing.
it needs to end with making me feel something.
nothing. just boredom and confusion.
and a whole lot of idgaf
— Jun 04, 2026 06:25AM
no
i’m not going to force myself to read more
you have a prologue?
fine
but it better be fucking interesting
this wasn’t even memorable except that i know it was shit
chapter one
the very first line needs to at least catch my eye
nothing.
it needs to end with making me feel something.
nothing. just boredom and confusion.
and a whole lot of idgaf
Starlight
is 5% done
ugh.
so i already dnf’d one book like five minutes ago and barely 8%/one chapter through that shit
i want to do the same here
the prologue
the first chapter
all of it is fucking shit
i am in no mood for shit fucking writing and storytelling
ESPECIALLY after an author has the audacity to start the book off with claims of it being an epic love story
🤦🏻♀️ nearly five hundred pages
— Jun 04, 2026 06:23AM
so i already dnf’d one book like five minutes ago and barely 8%/one chapter through that shit
i want to do the same here
the prologue
the first chapter
all of it is fucking shit
i am in no mood for shit fucking writing and storytelling
ESPECIALLY after an author has the audacity to start the book off with claims of it being an epic love story
🤦🏻♀️ nearly five hundred pages
