Eilidh Mackay’s Reviews > Shallow River > Status Update

My instincts are blaring red right now and I can’t see why just yet. I freeze when his face comes into view. I knew he would come for me. “You betrayed me River. Your own father.” A gasp lodges in my throat. “You look so much like how Barbie did when she was your age. Beautiful. But those eyes, they’re exactly like my mother’s. I hated my mother.”-pg348 what is Billy going to do? Where the hell is Mako?

“He’s coming up behind me, gun in his hand already raised to my head. Then he just stops cold when I lift River up, and he hears the first cries from a little baby. River is what ultimately saved my life that day. As soon as Billy heard her cry, he decided he liked the sound of it. And then made it his life’s mission to hear her cry until the day she escaped Shallow Hill.”-pg336 fucking ominous…

River McAllister’s lips feel like fucking heaven on earth. “Tell me what you want with your words,” “I… I need you.” I’m seconds from losing it as I impale her directly onto my cock. “I like the way you hurt me,” Something primal erupts in my chest. “I’ve waited my whole life for someone like you. Now that I found it, I’m fucking terrified of losing it.”-ch22 he is so gentle, fuck it is hot

“You also didn’t realize it was me that danced with you later that night.” A satisfied smirk crooks the corners of his lips. The fact Mako is the one who I should’ve been with all along. The fact I was so close to having him is almost devastating. “That was what made me fall in love with you, River.” Hot tears burn my eyes. “Come here Mako”-pg317 UGH FINALLY🫠❤️ River grab your man. DEVOUR HIM!

I glance down to see his bloody, shredded knuckles. Mako covered in blood is a delicious sight. I grab his limp dick and begin sawing it off with the box cutter. Then, without further hesitance, I shove the broomstick up Ryan’s ass. Even the duck tape can’t contain Ryan’s screams. It takes a minute for Ryan to pass out from the pain. Another four before he bleeds out and dies.-pg300 gory final minutes🫣 eugh

“Alison and I had sex,” she blurts. “Are you blushing?” she teases. “No. Fuck. Yes. What the fuck? Did you really?” Actively trying to keep my dick from getting rock hard.-pg282
“I’m torturing him,” she confesses softly. His pointer finger is definitely broken. I smile when I realise it’s the same finger Ryan broke on River’s hand. That’s my girl-pg284 they better make Ryan so jealous!!😏

I snap my fingers at him, shooting him the gun signal with a smile. “I fucked your exgirlfriend.”-pg269 random twist
“Daddy dearest.” “That vile piece of shit was sucking my dick at eight years old. I was the weak little boy that got fucked every night.” “Are you sorry for how you treated me?” “I enjoyed every single second of it. I will never be sorry.”-pg271 he makes my skin crawl regardless

In tandem, we both burst into action. He guns for the window while I run to the edge of the house. When he sees the knife I choose, his eyes widen comically. I laugh. I watch as the skin breaks beneath the sharp blade, and I just smile. I finally get him to the attic. Ryan’s body lifts until the tips of his toes touch the ground. He’s here in front of me, helpless, hurt, theres no stopping me.-pg294 REVENGE TIME

She’s incredibly street smart, even when she’s high. I’ve wondered if Barbie is much wiser than she lets on. “Have fun with your Billy 2.0 at home.”-pg232 nice hearing more about her mum
“What I’ve made perfectly clear is I’m not going anywhere until I know she’s safe. And if you look at exhibit A”-he points to my bruised fave-“that hasn’t happened yet.”-p238 to be looked after by Mako

No, no. Not my cat. “I’ll fucking kill him,” he screams, shaking my baby. “Just so you know, I’ve been spiking your drinks with antibiotics. You should be pregnant by now.” He’s lying. He has to be. God, please tell me he’s fucking lying. “And if you ever leave, especially with my baby, I will find you. And when I do, I will kill you.”-pg226 poor lil bilby being attacked😣🐈‍⬛