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This here's some gawdawful writin', pardners! 😣
Switchin' back and forth between 1st and 3rd person ... in the SAME paragraph! 🙄 That's just one example.
Who were the idiots that gave this hot mess such high ratings?!?
Well, I only paid 99 cents for it ... author shoulda paid me 99 cents!
— Jun 05, 2026 06:42PM
This here's some gawdawful writin', pardners! 😣
Switchin' back and forth between 1st and 3rd person ... in the SAME paragraph! 🙄 That's just one example.
Who were the idiots that gave this hot mess such high ratings?!?
Well, I only paid 99 cents for it ... author shoulda paid me 99 cents!
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