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Typo should be “pus” not “puss”

LOVE the Gothic aspects to this. The wording relating to the emasculation of the men, the women and girls, even our MC’s decisions

He’s been in conceits tent with using “fantasy” and “phantasy”

Shouldn’t “father” be capitalized considering it’s being substituted for a name?

“First to last, the daughters of Torgrimsvær jump into the sea.”

Typo run-on

Typo unnecessary hyphen

WTF?! Why would he tell him?!