A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton’s Reviews > Wing Weaver > Status Update
A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 20% done
Very descriptive writing but done in a way that builds the sensory levels of the setting and propels the story forward.
Our MC is squeaky clean so far. I need to see Aeden have at least one flaw.
I hate bullies. In this story so far it’s motivated by a matter of superiority which isn’t very strong. Maybe I’m missing something.
— 17 hours, 33 min ago
Our MC is squeaky clean so far. I need to see Aeden have at least one flaw.
I hate bullies. In this story so far it’s motivated by a matter of superiority which isn’t very strong. Maybe I’m missing something.
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A M “VegasBookDragon”’s Previous Updates
A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 16% done
Chap 11
Writing style is very smooth. I’m connecting with Aeden.
— Jun 05, 2026 05:31PM
Writing style is very smooth. I’m connecting with Aeden.
A M “VegasBookDragon” Van Eaton
is 4% done
Chap 2
Narrator Jack Fields is quite a talent with multiple voices and great vowels.
— Jun 03, 2026 05:36PM
Narrator Jack Fields is quite a talent with multiple voices and great vowels.
