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Ian Taylor is on page 203 of 579
"Alan's smile was intensifying into serenity."

The various deus ex machina of the plot just tumble out unadorned until Starritt tries to get prose-y and writes a line that makes no sense whatsoever.

For now though I still want to know what's gonna happen
— Jun 07, 2026 06:17PM
Drayton and Mackenzie

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Ian Taylor
Ian Taylor is on page 401 of 579
Pissed off that I'm enjoying this. Excited for the Dostoyevsky collection I've queued after so I can get back to being depressed.
— Jun 19, 2026 12:26PM
Drayton and Mackenzie


Ian Taylor
Ian Taylor is on page 53 of 579
Awkward prose (that line about "He felt in a way that only a 21 year old could" came out of nowhere. Who is our narrator here?) And I do not think I'm equipped with the right class background to really care about either protagonist.

That said, I'm not fully bored yet, so we'll see where it goes.
— Jun 03, 2026 10:48AM
Drayton and Mackenzie


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