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Soooo...a super annoying inconsistency I found is that she was wearing jeans, but then they say they lifted her dress. But then a bit after she is then pulling up her jeans to zip. And now on this page (158) "She dug around her dress' front pockets". This is all in one scene.
Ummmmm.....I had found a misspelling of "fight" instead of "feet" but this inconsistency is starting to set me up for my radar switched on.
— Jun 07, 2026 07:40PM
Ummmmm.....I had found a misspelling of "fight" instead of "feet" but this inconsistency is starting to set me up for my radar switched on.
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