Victoria Gandy’s Reviews > Immortal > Status Update
Victoria Gandy
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*spoiler* For the first 12 chapters the FMC is constantly reminding us and herself how much she hates the Immortals. There is no real chemistry in between the love interests so far, the MMC is only trying to protect the FMC because he will die without something that she has. The chemistry isn't believable knowing this. The MMC already betrayed her in the first half of the book. It's hard to take them seriously.
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