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- pacing issues as hell
- every other chapter is an exposition dump
- i too have been guilty of writing obnoxiously long sentences, but that’s why the use of different kinds of punctuation or restructuring is important for the sake of clarity and flow.
— Jun 11, 2026 03:02PM
- every other chapter is an exposition dump
- i too have been guilty of writing obnoxiously long sentences, but that’s why the use of different kinds of punctuation or restructuring is important for the sake of clarity and flow.
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