Thomas’s Reviews > Experiment 42: Outcasts of Orovoron > Status Update

I'm struggling to keep reading and I'm not sure if it's because I am someone unfamiliar with the YouTube series. I find that there's a lot of telling instead of showing and numerous grammatical errors... to the point that I've started highlighting them because it's deeply distracting to the story.

I read some reviews and I feel as though I'm reading a different book than everyone else.