Apollo :)’s Reviews > Martyr! > Status Update

"[...] I can hear him through the gurgling, the dying, and it really does make sense for that second, gurgling, the horse and the cloak and the hot flashlight, I know he's smiling and maybe I am too [...]"

These never-ending sentences are so yummy "thank you arash chapters" we all shout in unison

Arash, my guy, I haven't counted how many times you've thought about Mira from the market's breasts the past four pages but it was definitely 5 times too many...

"I pulled and she climbed out and lay down on the bentgrass, the mud-dirt, gasping, soaking wet, laughing, panting like an idiot fish, idiot girl."

Whatever rating I end up giving this book it was worth it for this chapter alone oh my god I am feeling so many things

The prose in this... delicious....