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Elisalie
is 20% done
The inner thoughts of the main characters are repeated far too often.It feels like the same inner monologue come up again and again, just phrased slightly differently each time.I’m only about 20% into the book,but so far there hasn’t been much development in terms of their feelings for each other.there are hardly any thoughts suggesting that either character is genuinely interested in the other person
— Jun 18, 2026 09:43AM
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