Starlight’s Reviews > Drop of Doubt > Status Update

nvm i’m rating this two stars

bleh

i knew that muriel bitch was sketchy as fuck

she didn’t get enough of a beat down imo

ugh
honestly
i still only care about the hospital scene with fmc and dr green / sean

so ig thats what this’ll be for me
this book
all the shit was worth it for that little scene

🤷🏻‍♀️ i’m still only rating this one star

^and it makes me wonder
it’s like a cycle or circle i’m in a loop of

do i like dr green with the fmc
their interactions now bc he’s shown up so little
and i don’t have enough info here to determine whether he’s a good mmc or person

and or
he’s just made that much of an impact already so suddenly

???? what am i even saying idk

i want more of him. and sucks this series isnt complete

^half bc there’s so many mmcs to try and remember and keep track of
and half bc ig i don’t have the time to care enough about

at this point
there are moments where certain mmcs get more page time and moments with the fmc
so i know them better and see them with her
their relationship progressing

now in thinking about dr green
who has had so little compared to the rest
and yet he’s already my fave

also

just had a revelation of a thought

i often would think
esp with rh books
it’s so easy to put the mmcs into roles and archetypes(?)

whereas i went into this specifically wanting and craving to read a rh with too many mmcs devoted to the fmc

and i just thought
the upside to it
having so many that theyre forgettable
not focusing on one or two love interests
i can almost forgive their flaws

i think there was surely at least one other moment before all of that that i enjoyed too
but i can’t recall at all rn
lol

prob for the best

i’m glad i remember the general imagery the scene gave my imagination
rather than remembering line by line
bc the writing has been shit and full of mistakes and errors and inconsistencies

this is a rollercoaster

it’s bad and good and great and bad again

it’s past noon the next day
paused reading around five am
at the chapter titled painting and cupcakes
or whatever it actually is

i recall so very little of what occurred in the first half of this book

besides the spa stuff
victor and his fancy mansion and shitty parents and creepy servant person

the masked guy
all the phone stuff

the hospital scene was my fave

i hate this stupid slow ass app

and i hate this book

already the lack of editing is infuriating

the plot holes and overwhelming stupidity by all these supposed clever main characters
makes me violent

the amount of times this stupid bitch has her phone broken, taken, list, stolen, snatched right out of her god damned hands

IS THERE NO FUCKING LOCK ON IT

WHY ARE THESE MMCS TELLING HER TO LOCK IT

i’m hoping i can do better and skim read faster

side note
not many authors use chapter titles anymore

and i can see why here

it’s a fucking mess

esp when it’s not even labled as numbered chapters next to the titles

i just have so much to dislike for this author and their writing

so i had read book one

but then jumped to the omnibus part one books 1-4
msitakingly thinking it was only book two

anyways

for whatever reasons
it’s a mess

no table of contents with chapter links to jump to

which was fucking annoying

couldn’t find omnibus part two so
i’m starting this book alone as is

yeesh
four hundred pages ??…