Ollie’s Reviews > One Dark Window > Status Update

DNF. I decided to stop torturing myself with this shallow and repetitive writing. "Captain of the Destriers," WE KNOW HIS TITLE WHY IS IT MENTIONED EVERY OTHER PAGE? I knew what the "twist" was going to be 3 chapters into the story. I was hoping I'd be proven wrong, but that was unfortunately not the case.
Side note: I have no idea how this made it to print without more thorough editing.