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Exposition time, where they stop with it to say their conclusion and explain everything for those who weren't paying attention or are bad at connecting the dots and stuff
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Wanting to be together but literally like the nature (?) of the world won't let them
— Jun 19, 2026 09:50AM
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Is this a good or bad thing? 👀
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V~ wrote: "Is this a good or bad thing? 👀"Both, good thing since without the explanation it was not 100% clear, but also bad, bad way to do exposition since it's just someone telling it
That makes sense. I wish I could read more Priest and have more time to read more of her works, I know her world building is super complex, but I think if she goes back and just edits a few things to make things a little clearer in the beginning, she wouldn't have to do the exposition. I still like her writing overall, tho. I know she isn't everyone's cup of writing.
V~ wrote: "That makes sense. I wish I could read more Priest and have more time to read more of her works, I know her world building is super complex, but I think if she goes back and just edits a few things ..."This is my first story from her. idk at what point in her career this was done, but I can see good relationship development and world creation, with some not so good writing in some parts. So I'm still excited to slowly see more and see how her style changes
