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Alynn
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This is supposed to be the author's adult debut, so why does this read like a weak YA? I've read her other YA novels, and the writing was far superior to whatever is going on in this.
— Jun 22, 2026 02:48PM
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Alynn
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The writing baffles me to no end.
"I was in the middle of wondering if I should drag her over the windowsill" Nobody thinks like this. Nobody talks like this. This is first person, you don't have to spell everything out.
— 4 hours, 30 min ago
"I was in the middle of wondering if I should drag her over the windowsill" Nobody thinks like this. Nobody talks like this. This is first person, you don't have to spell everything out.
