Silver’s Reviews > Into the Killer Sphere > Status Update

Prose is obvious, clunky and desperately needs editing: "The mobile phone attached to his arm vibrated. Every time he went out running he tried not to take his mobile with him, but always did. And it often rang." London weather is described as, "cold, windy, cloudy and rainy."

Why is the font miniscule?! The pages are large enough - did the ink cost too much? I'll probably donate it to the library sale.