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The writing continues to be clunky, while the central idea is good, the execution is lacking. The character development is contrived and the romances are for a lack of better word cringey.
The dialogue is poorly written.
— Jun 25, 2026 04:07PM
The dialogue is poorly written.
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So far it’s a fun read, however the writing feels a little clunky and somewhat childish, despite this the story is engaging.
— Jun 23, 2026 05:47PM
