Critical Sandwich’s Reviews > Dragon Haven > Status Update
Critical Sandwich
is 40% done
OK after reading info on the internet, I realized the first book had a 5-year jump in the beginning and Thymara is 16 and not 11, which makes the romance focus much better, but still unsatisfying
We should ask ourselves, why does Thymara 11yo romance felt believable to me after the Liveship Traders
— 6 hours, 18 min ago
We should ask ourselves, why does Thymara 11yo romance felt believable to me after the Liveship Traders
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Critical Sandwich
is 25% done
So far it's just relationship drama which is not comfortable to read considering Thymara is like 11 and is finding her peers having sex, feels horny looking at them, and also wondering whether any of the boys want her
— Jun 15, 2026 09:29AM
