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Lindsay
Lindsay is 59% done
It suuuch a bummer that the sex scene is so... traditional? Like if you have a lady knight and a male mage do you not even want to play around a bit with their exchange of power? Feels like the story is afraid to make Grey too dominant or masculine in general sadly. Their mutual bisexuality feels so unintegrated into THEIR relationship.
— Jun 26, 2026 03:09PM
The Second Death of Locke (The Hand and the Heart, #1)

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Lindsay is 53% done
I really wish this felt a bit more playful with gendered tropes
— Jun 26, 2026 08:12AM
The Second Death of Locke (The Hand and the Heart, #1)


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