Nathalie*’s Reviews > Phoenix Rising > Status Update

I find the story kinda choppy like it jumps a lot the flow is not smooth

I would be Sooo pissed if I were her... No one is telling her anything what's going on, what is she, why are these monsters trying to kill her and she's just going with it

Huh ?? Didn't she just meet these guys like that day and she doesn't really know John and she's already choosing

“No. John was the better choice.”

So there's 2 guys 1 she barely knows and one she just met but she's having moments with both of them .. like huh

The beginning is so sad