Parker Warburton’s Reviews > Gardens of the Moon > Status Update

Like actually what the fuck just happened, Erickson needs to just take a deep breathe in between some of these pages. That was some of the sloppiest writing I’ve ever read. ALLLLLL the way back in chapter 2 it was the same shit and he did so good all the way till these last 80-90 pages. You can’t just have 3 plot twists 20 new magical items and 200 new characters show up in 20 pages!???!!?? Frustrating.