Laurelle ’s Reviews > The Last Sunrise > Status Update

There are SO MANY grammar and formatting mistakes happening rn

“He walks over to his dresser and grabs a t-shirt, the one he was wearing when we first met, and changes into cut-sleeved t-shirt and cloth shorts. Neatly folding the new outfit and placing it on top of the dresser.”

Am i dyslexic or does this sentence make no fucking sense?

She spells Mamma Mia (the movie) as Momma Mia

Are you serious?

Many spelling mistakes like champagne fluke and notic as well as One on hand instead of On one hand

Did anyone edit this book?