Stephani’s Reviews > An Evil Premise > Status Update
Stephani
is 5% done
The premise is interesting, but the dialogue…it’s that kind of modern “clever” that never reads as a real conversation. The author’s desire to move the plot or describe a character shows through the transparent quips. As a result, nothing feels grounded enough to carry the plot. I’ll push on for now.
— Jun 30, 2026 05:25AM
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Stephani
is 19% done
I think the protagonist is schizophrenic. It’s such a choice to say that she’s been hallucinating her entire life. I guess that would make it hard to know whether they’re actually being haunted.
— Jul 02, 2026 05:23AM
Stephani
is 11% done
I stuck with it and now I don’t know whether it’s intentionally hammy because it’s about a mediocre writer? It’s got a Sam Rami quality to it. That is charming but is possibly not intentional.
— Jun 30, 2026 02:43PM
