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Having a character literally say “Explain X Worldbuilding Aspect to me like I’m a child” kind of overshot lampshading and just went to cloying. Like I get it is supposed to be tongue and cheek but let’s stand on business and have a little self respect. This is a narrative I don’t really need winks at the reader like this is a self aware nonfiction book