Elysian Fields’s Reviews > The Blacksmith > Status Update
Elysian Fields
is 20% done
Story is dry, back and forth. Past, present, different times if day, does not flow well. Almost feels static and dry, boring. Ready to give up.
— Apr 23, 2017 12:33PM
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Elysian Fields
is 45% done
Skimming the story, so very wordy. Repetitive thoughts, to much details slowed the story, feel like a slug reading it. Very disappointed. Not Mia's best by a long shot.
— Apr 23, 2017 12:47PM
