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Liphéo
is 50% done
Way to much narration. It feels so looooong.
I don’t have much to grab onto somehow I feel like i don’t understand the characters... I really want to connect with them though but... is it me or do we have a perfect case of tell but don’t show writing style ? @.@
— Jul 05, 2026 02:34PM
I don’t have much to grab onto somehow I feel like i don’t understand the characters... I really want to connect with them though but... is it me or do we have a perfect case of tell but don’t show writing style ? @.@
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