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Collin
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“So far, logic pointed to someone who knew enough Hawaiian to work its magic.” oh good I’m glad we’re almost halfway through a book about solving a murder committed via Hawaiian spell and gathered enough evidence to narrow down the possible culprits to anyone who speaks an indeterminate amount of Hawaiian
— Jul 06, 2026 08:49AM
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Collin
is on page 183 of 288
"Spiky, unruly hair lay greased flat against its back in a tangled mess" is it spiky or is it greasy and flat oh my god. is the editor in the room with us
— Jul 06, 2026 10:46AM
Collin
is on page 107 of 288
this gala scene is giving 2000s Not Like Other Girls nonsense
— Jul 06, 2026 08:37AM
Collin
is on page 104 of 288
this romance is so stupiddddd it's starting to pmo. this concept is so good and interesting and relatively fresh but we're going to ruin it with thee stalest and most unimaginative of romance/romantasy cliches?? okay whatever it's your book to ruin
— Jul 06, 2026 08:19AM
Collin
is on page 67 of 288
pg. 65: “She blinked and looked at me in the face for the first time,….”
pg. 67: “She met my eyes for the first time, her voice thin but clear.”
is it too much to ask that editors do their dadgum jobs once in a while
— Jul 06, 2026 06:59AM
pg. 67: “She met my eyes for the first time, her voice thin but clear.”
is it too much to ask that editors do their dadgum jobs once in a while
Collin
is on page 59 of 288
this is all pretty half-baked worldbuilding so far but I still like the concept a lot, so... crossed fingers some of these threads come together soon.
— Jul 01, 2026 01:25PM