Vanessa ⚔️’s Reviews > Fair Catch > Status Update
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 409 of 446
i get needing to take a beat.. but two months is a long time to ghost someone. and then you show up after he gets drafted saying you want to be with him, and you don’t really choose him over money or your family, you just spend 5 seconds talking to your mom and somehow you’re about to get everything you want anyway.. yeah this plot is fucking stupid. and Hayes can get fucked. ugh.
— Jul 06, 2026 11:53AM
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Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 410 of 446
look.. i’m all for Hayes giving up his family bullshit and inheritance, but it seems like another person is giving up everything for Kason to get exactly what he wants. so the toxic shit continues..
— Jul 06, 2026 11:58AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 378 of 446
if you’re going to change the fucking plot edit the rest of the book? the writing is absolute garbage. i’m so sick of these self edited books with so many fucking errors. get a content editor if you can’t find the mistakes yourself. how fucking hard is that???
— Jul 06, 2026 10:35AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 377 of 446
what are you fucking talking about.. he left the next morning. you knew he left the next morning. and he didn’t fucking block you??? what the fuck??? what is happening. is this just badly edited or is Hayes just a fucking liar?? Hayes honestly sucks. dump your parents, get a new job with your fancy degrees or go get a master and be happy. what????? am i missing something???
— Jul 06, 2026 10:32AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 360 of 446
the whole friend break was fucking stupid anyway. you can set boundaries and learn to stand on your own without cutting Phoenix out of your life. it never made any fucking sense. he changed his whole world for you, not the other way around. Kason just seems like a baby who can’t take no for an answer. fuck.
— Jul 06, 2026 09:25AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 343 of 446
thank fuck for small mercies. i can’t stand miscommunication.
— Jul 06, 2026 08:51AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 332 of 446
you stop being a pussy and you just fucking tell him. idiot.
— Jul 06, 2026 08:01AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 321 of 446
i don’t have a single clue how anyone likes this book.
— Jul 06, 2026 07:46AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 307 of 446
oh good. let’s through in some animal cruelty because this book wasn’t bad enough. fucking hell, get me the fuck off this ride.
— Jul 05, 2026 03:53PM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 306 of 446
someone save me from this hell. this book is so bad. i should have just skipped Kason’s book. i don’t give a fuck about him or Hayes. i don’t know what the fuck is going on but the writing is terrible and the story sucks so fucking much. the first two books weren’t THIS bad. i don’t understand.
— Jul 05, 2026 08:21AM
Vanessa ⚔️
is on page 281 of 446
i don’t understand any of this because Hayes’ family fucking sucked. why does Q love them? why does Hayes defend them? why did Hayes not protect Kason better? that dinner was literally a disaster.. and his parents seem cold as fuck.
— Jul 05, 2026 07:38AM
