Jade’s Reviews > The Dagger and the Daisy > Status Update
Jade
is 94% done
closed doors, absolutely no build up, no development in characters. more repetative and stilted dialog. and oh, hey, it hasnt even been a full 24h in story from the start of the book to now
— Jul 07, 2026 11:59PM
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Jade
is 16% done
This story has such an interesting premise. But the narrative is so... dull. It is very A then B then C, and the dialog is so... stilted.
— Jul 06, 2026 10:15AM