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Elsie
Elsie is on page 141 of 512
i like itttt
some of the writing feels a but repetitive and almkst strangeley written
but as someone who writes alot myself i get accidentally repeating thibgs yiuve already written
— Jul 09, 2026 02:24PM
Immortal Consequences (The Souls of Blackwood Academy, #1)

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Elsie is on page 195 of 512
i dint like when she writes two people intercating and refers to the other person as “the other boy” or “the other girl” it makes things so weird and confusing as if there were another person close by
— Jul 10, 2026 11:53PM
Immortal Consequences (The Souls of Blackwood Academy, #1)


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