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is 70% done
Has potential to be excellent
However, structure is disparate / sloppy transitions
Character set but too broad when author is constantly changing perspectives to really build attachment to any of them, yet not so broad to intentionally paint the town as a system or something along those lines. Stuck in a weird goldilocks zone (where goldilocks has neg connotation in this case)
Writing, solid. Atmosphere, 👍
— Jul 13, 2026 02:42PM
However, structure is disparate / sloppy transitions
Character set but too broad when author is constantly changing perspectives to really build attachment to any of them, yet not so broad to intentionally paint the town as a system or something along those lines. Stuck in a weird goldilocks zone (where goldilocks has neg connotation in this case)
Writing, solid. Atmosphere, 👍
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Jul 13, 2026 04:04PM
begins to meander as soon as slow burn tension begins to build more (w Louis' extended flashback / father scene/ revisitation of wife we never met and don't care about)
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