oatmeal’s Reviews > Love in the Light: A Musical Novel > Status Update
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My friend was excited to loan me this book, so I’m going to force myself to finish it. Kudos to the author for reimagining the medium, and we can always use more queer love stories. However… this reads like a tumblr fanfiction written by a 14 year old. Where was the editor? Grammar mistakes galore. Lots of telling rather than showing. Characters are 2 dimensional.
— Jul 14, 2026 05:23AM
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