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Dave Stone
is 25% done
This is very cute & sweet. RavensDagger perfectly threads the needle between too much sweetness and just the right amount of pathos. This trick requires a light touch. I'm impressed. Raven usually just goes over the top.
(Vibrating wand of cure hysteria. I'm dying)
— Jul 14, 2026 06:12AM
(Vibrating wand of cure hysteria. I'm dying)
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Dave Stone
is 95% done
Okay, it is starting to get TOO sappy / silly in parts. Working extra hard to please people who disrespect you does not make you 'nice', it makes you a tool.
Sure give people a second chance, unless that first chance was them trying to harm you.
— Jul 20, 2026 01:50AM
Sure give people a second chance, unless that first chance was them trying to harm you.
Dave Stone
is 65% done
for a book that almost too cute, this is pretty good.
Good story, good pacing, good character development, good world building.
— Jul 16, 2026 02:12AM
Good story, good pacing, good character development, good world building.