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Elisabeth is 30% done
This may be for someone, but it is not for me. This story felt a bit all over the place to me. I appreciate what the author is trying to do but im just not enjoying it. I am honestly having a hard time telling which characters perspective i am in, unless it is the sons. They all feel flat to me. It is written gorgeously though. I may pick this back up at a later date and try again, but as of right now its just not do
Jul 14, 2026 08:40PM
Pedro the Vast

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