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Marina
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I know it's early but am I the only one who thinks the copy editor is blind? The grammar and sentence structure is so clunky it's distracting.
— Jul 15, 2026 05:16PM
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Marina
is on page 271 of 640
The writing is so mediocre. Author doesn't trust the reader to figure anything out. Soooo much telling and barely any showing. The MMC is an entitled asshole who I really feel no empathy for at all. The dialogue is clunky. The sentence structure is annoying. The pacing is slllllooooowwwww. This book needs serious copy editing. I hear the ending is epic. <-- the only reason I'm still reading.
— Aug 03, 2026 05:32PM
Marina
is on page 159 of 640
It is slow and the magic system is not explained much. The writing is passable. Continuing to read cuz I wanna know what all the fuss is about. So far, I am not impressed. I truly don't care what happens to Vis. He is not a likeable character and the author hasn't given me any reason to like him. The echo of dead parents isn't enough for me to sympathize with him. Sp far he seems lile a total douche.
— Jul 25, 2026 09:01AM