Jersie B’s Reviews > The Lifeline > Status Update

I don't like the flashback chapters because they ruin my momentum and I don't like the story dancing around Joe. What happened is obvious and Will's chapters are in 1st person anyway so just put it out there so you can write other things that aren't just alluding to this one event that is so
pivotal to Will's current state of mind. And I actually wish Annie and Will hadn't met before the calls started happening