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Seriously bad writing. It feels clunky and over thought out. Maybe it’s been written and put through AI as it’s just diabolical.
I also feel that the author has not done any research into what she is writing. For one, if you’re going to use mead, do some research before you describe a sweet drink as a bitter liquid. Then in the next paragraph state it’s been distilled?! Seriously do your research
Jul 17, 2026 01:18PM
When the Moon Hatched (Moonfall, #1)

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