Janice Armstrong’s Reviews > Stormforged > Status Update

One dudes face scar is always tight, it’s been said countless times now. Some of the phrasing is awkward, for example “ he leaned against the wall to reserve muscle…” never heard it said that way and there are more instances like this

So far this book isn’t giving me a story just a chick running and her story constantly twitching, plot not really there or character development