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Sometimes it feels like this is being written by more than one person. Out of nowhere it switches up and the euphemisms are wrong, there’s typos, and the story doesn’t flow. Then it’s fine for a bit. I don’t understand, but it’s annoying and makes me want to DNF.
— Jul 19, 2026 09:28AM
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Jul 19, 2026 09:33AM
Okay maybe not euphemisms but I don’t know what to call them. Character assumptions? They’re dumb and don’t make sense. Neither do some of the moments of dialogue.
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