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Lindsey
is 99% done
It was not good. It was choppy. The love story had no flow or yearning. The main girl was obnoxious and battle ready after months of training and pure chaos only happens the last twenty pages. It felt random. Nothing really happened to move the plot along. Two stars. Really bad and that girl. Goodness was she annoying to no end. ⭐️⭐️
— Jul 19, 2026 10:29PM
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