Paul’s Reviews > The Astral Library > Status Update

The story has improved a bit but still poor writing and characters.

Only 2 chapters done so far but it’s not good. The MC is the whiniest person of all time. And anti-Jack Bauer for some reason. Also still can’t figure out when it’s supposed to take place. Best guess is 2037-2038. But that doesn’t really make sense either.. I’ll read at least 20% but if it doesn’t improve by then, I’m gonna calling it quits.