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Ashleen
is 42% done
I dunno man. The story is nice and the writing is okay. I DO NOT like the fact that the MFC is falling for the MMC like 48 hours meeting him. I also can’t stand the fact that the MFC is just so cool with everything. She falls back 130 years and it’s like ?? No biggie?? I’ll adjust?? She finds out life altering news and again no big deal?? Do not like that she’s been able to change the MMC views so fast
— Jul 19, 2026 11:17PM
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Ashleen
is 42% done
The book is also riddled with typos and grammatical errors
— Jul 19, 2026 11:18PM

