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Some quick thoughts: this absolutely rocks, however the pacing is all over the place. I wish we were moving a little slower and the scenes were a little more prepared. I am loving the fusion of sci-fi with fantasy, it’s such a unique and cool way to conceptualize a world. There are definitely some areas that could use tighter editing, but I’m having a great time with this!
— Jul 19, 2026 12:37AM

